This portfolio is a conclusion of the different things I learned here in Mr. Zavalas english class. With many different skills that were taught to me during these two quarters, this website sums it all up with the four traits of writing. These four traits of writing were included into almost every assignment we were given. As I present to you my website, be sure to answer the questions! Have fun doing your parental homework!
http://elizabethaliya.wix.com/portfolio1
1. I liked "Home to Me" best because Elizabeth got to share and express her life with words, it was kind of like an art that she had put together in an essay. The writing was really creative!
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3. I feel that voice was most successful for Elizabeth
4. I liked everything but Elizabeth has room for improvements because in her assignments she could stay more on topic instead of repeating herself. By doing that, she could also make the writing flow as one piece instead of going back and forth to the things she had already mentioned.